Wednesday 13 February 2008

Deceptive

these
veiled mornings
dissolve into radiance

tender
blossoms lured
into premature birth

5 comments:

Zhoen said...

Those being born always need at least a bit of coaxing.

Jean said...

Yes, but it's too early! I have changed a word.

Ivy said...

I like these hay(na)ku, Jean. :-)

Fire Bird said...

love the first photograph

Dale said...

(o)